How I wish the battle went...

2013-03-04T05:15:23Z

So my cousin and I were watching the movie, and then the battle scene came up and Jacob had just killed Santiago. When that happened, I paused the movie and I was like:

"I wish he actually pushed Renesmee off of Jacob or something."

She looked at me, bewildered, and she raised her eyebrows after a minute of staring at me and she shook her head. "Why?!"

So I explained this to her.

When Seth died and Leah howled, and Jacob heard and realized Seth was gone, he was so upset. That gave Santiago an advantage, and he jumped out the tree and pushed Jacob. Renesmee falls off his back and hits her head on another tree. Blood is coming out her head and she stares blankly at the sky. Jacob kills Santiago successfully, and sees Renesmee. Seeing her bleeding and her staring, he nudges her, and when she doesn't budge, he howls and tells the other members of the pack that Renesmee is dead.

Then, Edward hears their thoughts, and his eyes widened. Bella notices his face, and everyone begins to panic, realizing something was wrong. Aro looked curiously, and then Jacob comes out the woods. Bella realizes Renesmee's not on his back and screams. Everyone now thinks Renesmee's dead, which changes how everyone fights (since their main reason to fight was lost.)

Of course, later Renesmee wakes up (or doesn't, depending on whether this idea would continue as a vision or if the battle really happened) and looks around confused. And she walks into the battle just to see her parents beheaded. Jacob sees her and immediately takes her away.

If Renesmee didn't wake up, whoever survived the battle would later find her lying by the tree, blood on the snow around her.

I figured I could kind of make it a story, since my explanation to her was more (especially since she didn't read the books.) I'm pretty happy that I managed to write that. XD

And that's how I wish the battle went ~~(or ended, whatever.)~~

Don't judge me if you're a Renesmee fan, but ~~good~~ many writers kill/harm the characters closest to the protagonist to bring out the most emotion.

So.. yeah.

~Gabriella Cullen

"oh shes just a child she doesn;t deserv htat"

TELL THAT TO SUZANNE COLLINS, THE AUTHOR OF HUNGER GAMES WHO HAS KIDS KILL KIDS.

My Prediction On This 'Alternate Ending'

2012-09-07T02:24:52Z

CHECK OUT THE NEW TRAILER BEFORE YOU READ THIS. NO SPOILERS? DON'T READ IT THEN.Edit

So I've heard there's an alternate ending and there's a Volturi fight.. So what better way to end Twilight than with a fight??

Okay, I see all the vampires and wolves together. Then BOOM. Everyone's running to the Volturi, and they're running towards them.

Edward JUMPS INTO THE AIR, and I assume Benjamin, who's like an avatar, breaks the ice to get the water. Makes sense. Some people fall into the water though -- some of the guards from the Volturi, I assume.

Then we see Renesmee on Jacob's back, Jake's running as fast as he can away from this newer vampire. She looks TERRIFIED. Then just when things couldn't get worse, SOMETHING'S HAPPENING WITH KATE AND GARRETT THAT I CANNOT UNDERSTAND. She looks like she's getting hurt, but at the same time, it looks like she's protecting them both?? Actually, I'm not sure if that's Garrett or not. LOL.

Then, things get way awesome and Edward spins Bella around and she hits who I think is ARO! :o Yup. A kick. In the face. But just from my observation, someone or some people will die. This is just what I think.

Plus, the Volturi fight did not look like something Alice could see from her visions..

So what do I think will really happen? The Cullens and others will try to talk to them, but they won't listen, so they just attack. :/

After watching that new trailer, tell me what you thought of it. I was having a mini heart attack LOL. XD

And what do you think of the 'alternate ending' idea?

[OKAY, I FIGURED OUT THE ENDING AND READ A LITTLE ABOUT IT. I WON'T POST IT HERE THOUGH.]

~Gabriella

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How I wish the battle went...

My Prediction On This 'Alternate Ending'

CHECK OUT THE NEW TRAILER BEFORE YOU READ THIS. NO SPOILERS? DON'T READ IT THEN.Edit