Hi ,this is a fanfic about what would happen if Bella chose Jacob instead of edward. Ive never made one before so tell me what you think of this one

lets say Edward never came back to Forks because he thought Bella did die. Bella would wait ............and wait.................and wait and Edward would never come back, Then Bella would get with Jacob, but Edward goes to the voltori to die as he thinks Bella is dead. Once Bella hears of this she rushes to Volterra to save him. Bella gets there just in time and saves him,then they get back together and Jacob runs off and is never seen again.